Cleaving the month of NaPoWriMo

Just a little under half-way, so better than most of my cuts. I’m running low on time, so this is the best I can manage for the neat form in today’s RWP prompt.  I’ve seen cleaves, but I didn’t know it was a more formal form.  I think I can make this stronger, but not today.

the only time I drink their product is when I’m stuck in an airport without serious choices
to cleanse the palate vigorously left to wander among the tightly directional people
coated by foul and malodorous left-overs with every choice already made and held tightly
from altogether too heavy indulgences pressed firmly against the chest an access badge
night leaves in its wake sending to means to destinations to canned packages to open
up strong signals that perhaps slow meandering paths locked down for this moment’s passage
steady movement is best when standing past each other still on sliding toothed textures

There’s a sub-prompt here identified by someone else.  I thank the source quietly.


One response to “Cleaving the month of NaPoWriMo

  1. I didn’t know the form was, um, so formal, either. Good take on it, and yes, it would be fun to go further (I haven’t at all, as of yet) — good for you (you are keeping the month going admirably well)!

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